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Welcome To Salem

she can do a billion things to you
she can turn you into a frog
or maybe even a newt

she can cast her dreadful spell
and watch you wither in pain
she can trap you in a box
and make you go insane

she can say a little chant
you could become a dog
and begin to pant

she can conjure up a potion
which will make you fall in love
and take that away
with a tiny shove

luckily you live in Salem
where she could get hung

Author notes

I did not harm any animals in the writing of this spell

I know this probably sucks but its my first ever writting like this so hey I gave it a shot

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  • libithina
    November 11, 2008

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    Merry greet with this magical power
    Lib x x


  • Jocelyn.Jaded
    November 8, 2008

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    Haha I agree this was kinda of funny Very nice job on it. x]] Great write and keep up the workkkk.


  • Kinky Cuffs
    November 5, 2008
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    Its cool!!!!!!!It was funny too. I loved it!! Great write!!! Good detail and flow.Nice description.


  • Darkwell
    October 29, 2008

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    Class, Class gather round, gather round. this student has shared with us an important lesson about the dangers of a well prepared witch. as we all know he who must not be named has convinced a great number of dark witches to join him and i want you all to read and learn from this the kinds of spells you might encounter. shes pointed out that a dark witch is not afraid to use an unforgivable curse like the cruciatis

    she can cast her dreadful spell
    and watch you wither in pain

    and through the use of Feriverto can turn you into another creature such as a newt or dog

    she can say a little chant
    you could become a dog
    and begin to pant

    Mad eye moody knows all about this curse:

    she can trap you in a box
    and make you go insane

    he was in a box for the whole school term

    remember class, witches can be brutal so be prepared. for this students effort in warning her fellow students i award 5 belgium chokolate magic frogs, a signed copy of "witch way did they go?" by hurryann pickaside and 15 points to Ravenclaw