Chillings in the breeze,
Making our blood freeze.
Falling of the snow,
It's Fall's time to go.
Heat up this frozen tomb,
That we call our room.
Forget this Winter crime,
With our sweet love rhyme.
Our burning love,
And snow white dove,
Let's Winter bring,
The rise of Spring.
Author notes
AP Name - B.m.w
okay well the first verse came to me while I read the rules then in the middle of writing I forgot about the 50 words >.< Then I went back and counted how many words I had after the second verse. Thankfully I still had enough to write a third verse but the flow got fucked up I know >.< but if you read it slow the you can make the flow fluctuate and fit nicely together. Well I hope you like it. ^^""
A contest entry
- 50 words: Winter by whiterabbit..
500 points, ended November 27, 2008, 28 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Winter Poetry by misticmoonlite.
575 points, ended November 13, 2008, 23 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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i liked this
to count words is hard to do and make sense,but can be done, with a great mind to do the posting, thank you for this entry
Good luck
Linda
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Very good and sweet. I love springtime too (shhhh) better that winter.
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