Gaze upon me
my billowy soft white
cold only in sight
empty spaces
waiting for imprints
of snow angels
frozen in time
I await to envelope you in warmth
do not be afraid of my cold
look beyond billowy imagination
i am here to enveope you with warmths touch
winter remembrance.
Author notes
HALEIGHGRACE
A contest entry
- 50 words: Winter by whiterabbit..
500 points, ended November 27, 2008, 28 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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Wow. Fantastically written poem. Very colourful with loads of imagery. I don't like winter that much we get awful weather in the UK most of the year round, but when winter is here it is worse than ever. Just recently we have had flood warnings. Great poem that captivated me from beginning to end.
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Thankyou so much for the great comment puppy
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SO SOFT AND LOVELY!!!!
This beautiful and soothing poem reminds me of a new fallen snow, fresh and untracked! The bright sunlight reflecting off of its smooth surface.
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I remember the cold LOL. Great write
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