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The Special Ride

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For Bryce on his birthday

I pray that God grants you a perfect wind

from His spirit with all His blessings

to race across the day’s desert,

heart's engine roaring with joy,

chasing yourdreams

feeling the exhilaration in your heart,

because a Mother’s love

never leaves your side.

 

May every trek through your life

be fueled by faith,

able to cherish each event

savor all the Motorcross moments

that bring you such happiness.

 

And be graces with many more years

of thrills and hope

by the hand of the Lord

as He watches over your every trail,

making sure it is a special ride.

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Wishing you a truly Happy Birthday.
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  • stavykm gold member
    November 18, 2008

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    Congradulations penman for the Bronze. Bryce and his girlfriend judged yesterday for his birthday contest. He laughed about the picture and though your poem was really cool and Bryce and him were fighting about who got silver... LOL... It was really funny. Thank you for acknowledging my son.
    Wishing You Many Blessings
    Much Love Always
    Bryce & Kelle Marie


  • Symphony
    November 10, 2008

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    This was beautifully written; so uplifting, and prayerful, I am sure that Bryce must surely enjoy it also as he is a Christian, and this be about his favourite topic - you did a wonderful job with it!


  • Cynthia Gaines gold member
    November 3, 2008

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    Beautiful Sentiments, Poet!!

    You are always thinking of others, and this brilliant poem just shines with hope, love and faith!! Thank you for sharing - I'm wishing you the best of luck in the contest!! Peace always, Cyn xx


  • Talking Toni gold member
    November 2, 2008

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    Great JOb!!!!

    This is such an encouragement for Bryce and his family as well...Your wishes for his safety and success are evident in this poem and you wrote this with great emotion and I love the picture!!! Thanks for sharing!!! Gos Bless you for your kindness you have always shown to Kelle and her family!!!~~~Toni~~~

  • carole21
    October 31, 2008

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    what a nice write for a bd . . well done . . liked "I pray that God grants you a perfect wind" and "because a Mother's love never leaves your side" . . good luck in the contest !!


  • daviscth silver member
    October 29, 2008

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    This is an awesome poem for Bryce!! It's sure to be a favorite of them all. Good luck in the contest.

  • stavykm gold member
    October 28, 2008
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    Just Brilliant

    Wow this is just wonderful. Oh I loved the line and he will too I'm sure....

    May every trek through your life
    be FUELED BY FAITH... LOL

    FUELED BY FAITH IS THE MOST BRILLIANT WORDS FOR HIS RACING. When I read that part I got goosebumps all over. Oh penman thank you so much for this wonderful poem. I know Bryce will love it too. That picture is just great as well as the imagery you portrayed here and the positive energy and encouragement you also give...Again thank you for writing for us, we shall always treasure this poem. Best wished in the contest.

    Wishing You Many Blessings
    Much Love,
    Kelle Marie

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