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Shaking Off Them Blues.

 

We got us a black man

running for president,
never thought I'd live

to see the day, Lord Almighty,

and he's winning too.

Ol' Johnny McCain

said he was gonna
whip Obama's

"you know what"

but it 'pears he's

the one getting whipped.

John tried the novelty

of a woman for his vice,
'cept that's all been done before,
but never a black man.
course I would like

to see a woman win someday,
it would truly be a

kinder, gentler nation.

But now we got

this black gentleman,
reaching out to the poor

and middle class,
blending right into

the melting pot.

Wants to make us all
some stone soup,
where everyone

contributes
and all get fed.
He's the rock taking the heat,
we gotta throw in our votes
and fatten the feast.

I'll betcha

Martin Luther King
is dancing in his grave,
hip-hopping and

Bo Diddly-ing
and praising God.

You see he'd been

to the mountaintop,
in fact his spirit

lives there now,
but the White House !

holding a black man!!
that's a whole new

mountaintop.

Free from the

chains of a legacy
centuries old,

bending them into change.

Rich folks all rushing around,

calling the kettle black, 
buying fancy clothes,

but you can't dress up the truth,
it's naked, always has been
and the truth is ..."it's time."

Time to take a huge stand,
make racism catch a bus
back to the 50's,
ride in the back too.

Skin deep isn't

so thin anymore,
it's thick in a nations

warm handshake.
It's the chance

for a black man
to sit in the oval office,
that sacred seat

denied for so long.

Might just have to call it
The Black House,
for eight years or so,
who knows.

It's been a dark place
for the last eight years,
Time to landscape the bushes,
and plant some seeds
of common sense in that
big ol'chair behind

the great seal.

United states at last,

You see we  got us a black man
running for president,
tearing it up like Jesse Owens did,
way out in front of the race.

Oh, feet don't fail him now.

And the best part is,
I'm a white man,
whose ready for

some compassion,
been feeling the blues

way too long.

Gonna punch out some

retribution for all of

my ancestors

cruel mistakes,
clean the slate,
in a tiny little booth

that's gonna,
shake the status quot,
you ready America, hang on....
here we go.

 

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~Artis



 

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  • Lyrical Rain
    November 16, 2008
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    I liked the poem and the concept. So all I have to say is good luck in my contest


  • Emerald Dog
    November 9, 2008

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    This is a wonderful, expressive piece - filled with hope and laced with joy. I'm sure that virtually the whole world was thrilled that Obama won - but now reality bites. I hope that he makes an enormous difference - and brings liberty, responsibility and humanitarianism to a nation that seemed to lose all of those things under your last numbskull president! Good luck in the contest!


  • Nostalgia
    November 4, 2008

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    This is simply awesome! Not exactly a creative comment I' know, but it simply is. This is a very blunt, straight forward piece, and I apprecaite that, thanks for entering.


  • Rachel Kruger
    November 1, 2008

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    A very controversial subject nicely wrapped in humor. Welcome to Africa
    The good time blues paying the dues are here to stay!


  • Angelo di Luce gold member
    November 1, 2008

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    Fine points you raised here, though I think if a woman was to rule America or any other country
    it would be worst
    Remember the Iron lady of England?
    Well I do very well, for she fucked us good, real good!!!!!!!!!
    Cheers to the stupid men that rule in ignorance
    than a bitch that rules in hate.
    Nicely done.


  • BehindTheShadow
    October 31, 2008
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    Great piece!


  • righteousme
    October 31, 2008

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    FRIGGIN GREAT! JUST ABSOLUTELY AMAZINGLY INSPIRING!!!! I am an Obama Supporter and I hate bush so I can not only relate to your piece but appreciate it for what it stands for ... CHANGE !!! and believe you me, i am ready for the change.... once again, great piece and good luck in the contests you entered with it!!!!


  • csmmoms2
    October 31, 2008
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    Wow

    Righton...righton...righton! -c


  • Aimee Hill
    October 31, 2008

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    Brilliant!!

    I too, never thought I'd see the day!

    I liked this write, it was quite enjoyable to read. That given said, the humor was easily placed and made the poem even more fun to read. Love the 'language' in which you wrote it too.

    Awesome job, very well done!!


  • daviscth
    October 31, 2008

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    Good job on stating your views!! I too, am white. God made us all and color is only skin deep anyway. It's time people realized that. Good luck with this, you have a great entry.


  • PeppyHappy1
    October 31, 2008

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    A novelty yet meaningful take on the election. I know how seriously everybody is taking the election, and this was entertaining without demeaning the whole thing.
    Good job from the Peppy Happy crew.
    xx


  • Valesha
    October 30, 2008

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    i can't express in words how much i really love this poem!!!!!!!!

    who knew that a man with color would pass strifes and racial lines to do what many were afraid of. i'm happy, supportive, yet scared. i know its a blessing for us , but you know the devil is always on the prowl. he can never let anything be good for too long. im just praying God bless us with a good change and that the nation see the good things obama can do(let alone a negro can do). i guess we (negroes) been underestimated for so long, that even we sometimes understimate ourselves. your poem is wonderful. you said it all. love the narrator, he's great.lol

  • michaeline
    October 30, 2008

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    Your fellings are really clear in this and so many people agree to a time of change you are so right.You show great hope and passion on this subject.I do agree it is time for change we will just have to see if it is for the good.I think it will take some time but it will happen.8 more years,we will just have to wait and see I guess.any way you were easy to understand and your flow on this poem is great.Glad I got to read this.Good luck on the contest.


  • Nom de Plume
    October 30, 2008

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    Nice write... but I laugh when people complain about Bush's years... hell at the time most people wanted him in office, says a lot for the mentality of the average American... as for rascism, we all know that that is alive and well everywhere on earth, none more so then America... and you really think the power brokers behind doors are going to allow Obama to do what he wants ?? a lot of Americans dont even vote, and its this apathy to not only that but the rest of the world around them that gives America the arrogance tag...

    anyways, sorry, digressed... enjoyed your write all the same...


  • Ligeia
    October 30, 2008

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    This is cute!
    It made my day, to be completely honest.
    Oh, politics.
    Great write, keep it up.

  • Francis Vincent
    October 30, 2008

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    good job

    wow, you emcompassed so much
    feelings, history, reality, imagery, political correctness, incorrectness, etc
    so true
    a monumental historical event
    same with Ms. Palin
    i recently went to my 40th high school reunion
    what a great time to see the guys
    and
    i mentioned that
    class of '68
    the big thing was mr. nolan's math test the next day
    and, of course, so many of the events you relayed in your work
    they were not even thought of
    yiour verse is truly an inspiration for future generations
    and your message is so clear
    one vote counts
    makes a difference
    shows support
    defies apathy

  • femurlee
    October 29, 2008

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    This is a remarkable tribute to Senator Obama and everything he stands for. The exuberance that radiates from this work is felt by a lot of people. Wonderful job! Peace.


  • princessleejwctlvr2
    October 29, 2008

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    You never cease to amaze me!!! You always do such a very beautiful and incredible job with your pieces!!! This is so truly magnificent!!! Keep up the hard work!!! You did a very very lovely job!!!!!

  • veiledprofanityhehe
    October 29, 2008

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    Hi. I used to read your stuff all the time, but this is the first I've read in a long while. I really like this. It made me laugh, but most of all imbued me with a sense of empowerment and hope. here we go.

  • Cloudwatcher
    October 29, 2008

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    I've always thought it should be called the Gray House. Maybe the name will change eventually.

    Nothing against either candidate, but I just wish that there were more choice. For too long, it's been pick one or pick the other. Sure, there are other parties on the ballot but it's like they don't count for anything. I think that if everyone running were given equal media attention and campaign money(by limiting the contributions of corporations), then there would be a good deal more change with less people being owned before they actually enter the office of president. (Ah, enough ranting for now).

    Great idea for a poem and it was a fun read.


  • Edwardlover
    October 29, 2008
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    WOW...

    this is a really moving poem... I'm cryin' it's very truthfull. and it's heart felt. Lett's just say...
    IT ROCKS.


  • Darkness-My Home
    October 29, 2008

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    Amazing poem. Representing all of my emotions. Obama is political choice too, and I'm glad someone feels the same way I do about Him. YAYS 4 YOU!!!


  • Quill Bill
    October 29, 2008
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    i'm not one for playing god but a burning bush sounds good to me.


  • Kiddy
    October 29, 2008

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    Nice one... Election time poetry?
    It conveys what you wanted to very clearly...
    Good job...
    Will get back to your other poems soon
    Love
    Kiddy


  • Wolfdog silver member
    October 29, 2008

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    Superb plus

    Yes, I'm ready. Extremly well written. Perhaps Senator Obama will be this generations FDR (Franklin Delano Roosevelt). Even recreating the Works Progress Administration to create jobs for the homeless, instead of treating them almost like trash. For more information about FDR, just click on this Google Link:

    http://www.google.com/search?sourceid=navclient&ie=UTF-8&rls=RNWO,RNWO:2008-24,RNWO:en&q=%3CFranklin+Delano+Roosevelt%3E

    For more information on the Works Progress Administration, just click on this link:

    http://www.google.com/search?sourceid=navclient&ie=UTF-8&rls=RNWO,RNWO:2008-24,RNWO:en&q=%3CWorks+Progress+Administration%3E

    For more information on the problem of Homelessnes, just click on this Google Link:

    http://www.google.com/search?sourceid=navclient&ie=UTF-8&rls=RNWO,RNWO:2008-24,RNWO:en&q=%3CHomelessness%3E


  • ears2hearyou gold member
    October 28, 2008

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    smiling ear to ear..............
    absolute-ly loved your poem....
    it fed the heart and soul
    you know that part of us....
    that is color-less...
    and BEATS the Rhythum and Blues
    of Happiness and BOLD HOPES!

    Artis..you little devil.....
    this is a HIGH FIVE
    SLAP MY ASS and KISS ME TWICE
    FABULOUS POEM!

    ears/Seattle
    We are celebrating .......YOU!
    let's dance!
    I promise I won't laugh!


  • still.she.waits
    October 28, 2008

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    wow. i love this, especially the language that you used. everything just fits. there are so many parts in this that i like, but i have to say this stanza tickled me most:

    I'll betcha
    Martin Luther King
    is dancing in his grave,
    hip-hopping and
    Bo Diddly-ing
    and praising God


    nice job, i just hope this doesnt become too controversial once read by the masses.

    -and

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