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How

How can you sit there and watch me fall.
You do for everyone else but me,
I give to what you need.
But thats not good enough for you.

I can't take this anymore I'm about to break down,
Lose my train of thought.
You sit there and watch me fall further down the hole,
How come you won't help me?
But you well help everyone else out.

How can you say your my mother.
I feel like I have been on my own.
Your never home anymore.
You expect me to change my plans for you.
I can't keep doing that.

Your not helping the matter.
I'm torn up inside.
I do do do for you.
But if I ask for you to help me,
its later I will.

I can't do this anymore,
I'm on my own in this world again
So don't try to act like my mom when you weren't there for me,
When I needed your help

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  • FallingRainDrop
    December 7, 2008

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    this is really sad. but an amazing right! i'm sorry that you have to go through that. keep srong and keep up the good work! :]


    • Fallen Hard
      December 11, 2008
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      thank you

      Thank you for the comment. i got really upset with my mom cuz now she wants something to do with me and i'm already to far gone. i feel like i have been on my own since i was 16 she's never home and when she is she is sleepin. on the weekend when i wanna spend time with her she never wants too so when she ask if i want to spend time i don't want too.. I have been supporting myself for 3 years now with getting my own things for myself. but thank you for the comment!
      lexie

      • FallingRainDrop
        December 11, 2008
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        wow that is really rough. no one should have to go through that. your suppose to be able to be the kid, not the adult. im sorry. well hang in there hun, and i will defintaly be checking out more of your work!! :]


  • Puppydog gold member
    November 8, 2008

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    DEEPLY SAD!!!!!!

    This is so sincere and so sad! I am not sure if this is true but if you ever need a friend you know I am not hard to find. You always have a friend in me Alexis.'s

  • Ready for 2010
    November 2, 2008

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    Alsome Write

    I can't take this anymore I'm about to break down,
    Lose my train of thought.
    You sit there and watch me fall further down the hole,
    How come you won't help me?
    But you well help everyone else out.

    How can you say your my mother.
    I feel like I have been on my own.
    Your never home anymore.
    You expect me to change my plans for you.
    I can't keep doing that.

    Your not helping the matter.
    I'm torn up inside.
    I do do do for you.
    But if I ask for you to help me,
    its later I will.

    I can't do this anymore,
    I'm on my own in this world again
    So don't try to act like my mom when you weren't there for me,
    When I needed your help
    Sis u have done here I can totally relate to this poem all the way . I understand how u feel and what u going through. I hope u are doing okay. Hugs to ya sis. Keep the ink flowing your poetry is alsome. U need me I am here for ya.

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