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xXx--On Halloween Night--xXx

On Halloween night,
Witches take steady flight,
Ghouls give little children a fright,
And darkness replaces light,

On Halloween night,
Kids trick-or-treat in delight,
The sun is no where in sight,
And the moon reaches a new height,

On Halloween night,
Teenagers break into fight,
People roam the street till after mid-night,
And toddlers prance out of excite,

On Halloween night,
Vampires are out looking for a bite,
Flashlights shine bright,
And monsters boast out of might,

On Halloween night,
The dead and living unite,
Ghosts and spirits fly higher than a kite,
And angered souls lash out in spite...

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  • Amunet Wolfbane Moderators member
    November 23, 2008

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    I agree this one has a great flow to it and it does seem more into the spirit of halloween. It has a more positive and lighter tone. Very nicely done.


  • hardluck
    October 30, 2008
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    This one has a nice flow,

    I think it is more halloweenie. I guess that right.