Somewhere still dream dancing
With music playing soft in sleep
Moving quietly cross the floor
In-tune with it's heart felt beat
When awake their life is dance
With a true and magic flow
Souls entwined with a lover's rope
In a life both fast and slow
The future both in dreams and life
Will revolve around the dance
For they were too lost souls
Who then took lover's chance
A contest entry
- THE DANCE OF LOVE by Whispering Wind.
700 points, ended November 12, 2008, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Binding of musical souls, what a masterpiece !
Not only is it beautiful you can feel music and see beauty within this wonderful painting you have woven with words.
Hope you win !
Good luck
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So sweet! A lovely dance indeed for two hearts entwined!
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Lovely To Read
Reading your poem brings a smile. It is so lovely and upilifting to read. Nothing more romantic then dancing with a lover. Have a beautiful evening dear friend. Take care. Hugs and smiles.
Love, Sandy
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BREATH TAKING
Your words float across my screen like the sweetest lovers dance and touch my heart so softly its music so completely...thank you very much for sharing this wonderful piece of art work with me and for entering
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A really, really lovely poem that makes for smiles and hugs!
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