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Our Dance of Romance

A starry autumn night,
Leaves of reds and oranges blowing in the cool breeze,
Inside of a warm house,
By a fire glowing so bright in the fireplace,
You and I sit on the couch,
Watching a romantic movie,
Drinking some wine,
Candles lit everywhere,
Red roses filling the room,
Extracting their sensual fragrances of romance into the air around us,
As we sit,
You slowly and cautiously move your arm around my shoulder,
My head slowly,
And gently,
Lies itself to rest upon your shoulder,
Then,
You turn your head,
I look at you,
You stare into my eyes,
I raise my head,
And stare into yours,
Lost in their sea of blue,
Everything in the room seems to disappear,
All that's left are our two hearts,
You slowly,
And gently,
Brush my hair from my face with gentle fingertips,
Slowly running them down my face,
Across my lips,
My body begins to tremble,
You lower your hand to my chin,
Slowly pulling me closer,
And closer,
And closer to you,
You,
Still looking into my eyes,
And I in yours,
You move your lips to meet mine,
In a rythmic dance,
That shall continue through the night,
By the fire side,
With candles,
And roses,
And scents of sensual love,
And romance,
My body still in a trembling state,
I close my eyes,
The cool autumn breeze blows through the window,
And brushes my hair,
You pull away,
You look upon me with such love,
Such devotion,
Such tenderness,
Our lips meet once again,
Entwined in our sacred dance,
All sense of time,
Vanished,
Our bodies become one,
They join in this dance,
Of love,
And romance,
And in the end,
They lie next to each other,
Inseparable,
With such love,
Gentleness,
And tenderness.

Author notes

Option #1 Write about love. I want it descriptive, very descriptive.Give me imagery. Make me feel the emotion within the poem. RAW EMOTION!

**Heartbroken-Headcase**

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  • Poetryintheblood gold member
    November 16, 2008
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    Thank you for your most sensually beautiful entry, Josie


  • Sunkissed xo
    November 14, 2008

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    What an exquisite write. Your stunning words moved my heart and soul! You depicted this scene and created the atmosphere so well; the imagery was absolutely divine. A very well-written piece! Thanks so much for entering the contest

    peace xx


  • babydollxgonexwrong
    November 4, 2008

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    Nicely descriptive. Great imagery and emotion. I like the way you really made the reader feel as if they were the one in the poem. Great work and thanks for entering! :]


  • Jaffa-
    October 30, 2008
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    There is not one bad thing that could have been said about this poem. It is a truly amazing piece of true art. It made the hairs on the back of my neck stand up. So emotional and descriptive. Just what i was looking for, Great write and good luck in the contest.


  • Danny Beatty gold member
    October 30, 2008

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    Roses again, but then again, they belong here. Another romantic tour de force. I like the way you increase the depth of surroundings, the closing in of things as you reach into your deeper feelings and physical expressions become inseparable from the roses, the light and the one you love.



  • Whispering Wind Moderators member
    October 30, 2008

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    BREATH TAKING

    now this is a true dance of love...emotions flowing all over this page and i thank you so much for entering

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