Just to look towards the sun
to see whats hiding behind the suns rays
a whole new world that I wish existed
but doesn't...not quite yet
I wanna feel the heat from the sun above on my skin
to be engulfed in its warm sensations
I just want to raise my arms to the sky
and turn 'round and 'round 'til I fly away
The grass is soft under my feet
my socks and shoes are some place else
I feel you standing next to me
and feel you coming closer
A quick movement
and we're lying on the ground
we're laughing while in embrace
just looking at each other...
Thats when I feel the heat
from the sun above
and the sensations I get when I'm near you
and when I get the feeling to fly
its only into your arms
Author notes
10/28/2008
WarmHeartedGeisha
A contest entry
- Farewell to Fall Invitational by Kikai Ni.
800 points, ended December 10, 2008, 23 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - round one (for everyone) prewrite contest ENTER ENTER ENTER (AND YES THAT MEAN'S YOU too by serenity silvermoon.
927 points, ended February 16, 1509 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Say What You Want, If it's hurtful u'll be ignored
Comments
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This portrays the perfect emotion that is closest to love but still transferrable; patient but eager, excited but quiet. And all that bursts into joy. Perfection.
Masterful. Excellent work.
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WOw
Very good job , I loved it , keep it flowing together
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welcome back to the pen my friend, this is a wonderfully done poem it says a lot then the wards can express but together, keep it flowing
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nice work please read some of mine
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