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The Path I Have Learned

This is a twist,
This is a turn,
In the path I have learned.

Can nothing leave me alone?
Can I never be alone?
Can you take me away?

How am I suppose to be
When there is nothing
Standing beside me?

A twist
A turn
A dent in the path I've learned

Why does this happen to me?
Just when I was finding my way again.
Will I ever be alone?

Will I forever be alone?

HOW AM I SUPPOSE TO BE
WHEN THERE IS NOTHING
TO HOLD UP ME?

Do I sing?
Do I dance?
Do I cry?
Is everything going to alright?

Why do I fell alone when everyone's around me

i have not been able to write for awhile so im rusty if its bad tell me

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  • Dark Dragon of fire
    December 10, 2008

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    i can look at the poem and actually see, some of this with in me. It shows us the path, maybe the way, but amongst us all, it can lead us astray.


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    November 7, 2008

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    Life is full of these constant circles I've found. And at times we all feel alone even when surrounded by a crowd. I think once we become our own best friend, then others come more easily.