Emotions exerted,
Feelings reverted,
Drownding in shame,
While deep in pain,
Trapped in a quilt,
Made up of guilt,
Writing this song,
To tell you whats wrong.
Tried to keep it a secret,
But i just couldnt keep it,
Our lips had touched,
But it didnt mean much,
Your love gives me hope,
As i lie here and mope,
Ive been thinking about what to say,
But it wont matter anyway.
I hate that i cheated,
But it wont be repeated,
Mallorie is a word,
Not one to be ignored,
That word can change a life,
As quickly as a knife,
Your in all of my dreams,
Atleast thats as it seems,
I hope it never ends,
The feeling of more than friends.
I feel undeserving of you,
No matter how much i love you.
Author notes
i wrote this after me and my x girlfriend mallorie broke up.i cheated on her and i became depressed for a year of my life and i learned that i should have told her that i cheated on her when i did it.but instead my best friend told her after we dated for over a year bc he wanted to be with her.. eventhough its been a over a year i still love her
tell me if you like ???
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this is a really good poem
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i do like a lot!
this is very good, have you let the person this is about read this? because it's very powerful, it comes off as pure emotion, you can feel the pain and the sorrow, but there is also a bit of desire and the need to make things right again. my only criticism is that the rhyming seems a little forced, but a lot of my rhyming poetry comes out that way too, it can be a real challenge sometimes but there's no better way to get better then to write it, so good job and keep working on it, it doesn't take away from the poem!
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