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A difficult question; A long explanation

To ask me what is on my mind
is a very difficult question
the fact I can't explain it
is a very rare sensation

All i know is I feel numb
I feel confused and alone
but i do know I am eternally loved
i have one who calls me His own.

I don't know how to answer the question
How are you today?
I honestly don't know what to do
Haven't a clue what to say.

I know where I'm going
at least to some degree
My head and heart play on a see-saw
At least i know  I'm free

Free to feel nothing
but free to feel every emotion
I don't live my life for me anymore
My life, To Him, A devotion.

I feel a little messed up,
Not knowing really what to do
I know what I would like to know
But I don't know what is true

I ope this doesn't continue
for much longer now
I wouldn't know how to handle it
But it will finish somehow

Its time to tell my story
next week at 7 o'clock
Will my body let the words come out
or will my throat be blocked?

I'm getting a little nervous
but I'm feeling quite relaxed
even though i know my mind doesn't stop
when I hit the sack.

My head has begun to hurt a little
I can't really make it disappear
I know that He will listen
And I know that He will care.

But for now I feel quite empty
But i know I'm not alone
I know that I am loved because
there is one who calls me His Own.

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Contest poem, ram emotion, kind of a free write, was an interesting outlet.

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  • slipperssun gold member
    November 1, 2008

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    great write and as always it is awesome to see that you have someone with you always to lean on...good luck with the contest
    cheers
    Jen


  • Coffer
    October 30, 2008
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    A great write overall that tell about the struggles and hardships we endure, but that you are one that has someone to fall back on. A real relationship that is health for you future, and I would like to cogradulate you on both that, and the write! (: Great job, good luck come judging time.

    P.S. Please try to fix some typos, punctuation, and grammer before judging time comes.


  • Tyl3r
    October 28, 2008
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    Nice poem. Good luck in the contest.


  • broken-colours
    October 28, 2008

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    Sort-of describes me. I know I've got God on my side and He pretty much knows the plans for everything, but I have no idea where I'm going, muchless what I feel about everything. Very nice! Good luck in the contest.

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