My darling husband today we bless our marriage,
In love with one another we walk
Each day we promise that we will find the time to talk.
We will pray together,
Love one another and never take each other for granted.
Our love is special,
One of a kind
Let's appreciate each day we have together,
Two peas in a pod
Let us promise
We will always have time to pray
Spend time with God every day.
We will always do what is right,
Talk to each other,
Help each other,
Every day and every night.
We will care for each others needs,
Although my dear you will be head of the home
I promise to submit to you and not to moan.
As we walk the storms of life
I promise my love to be a good wife.
A contest entry
- Wedding Vows by Riftkin.
900 points, ended October 31, 2008, 18 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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This is beautiful. But my dear friend. never be submissive it tells the Universe you do not honor youself and that is wrong. Always stand side by side, equal and balanced like a kitchen scale, bearing the weigh equally and adjusting whenever there is a slight fall on either side.
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This is wonderfully written. I love it very much.
Thank you for entering my contest.
Riftkin
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This is so beautiful! You are so blessed and the poetic expression of your life is wonderful. What a wonderful statement of faith and love. Bravo!
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this was very pretty. i wish i could feel that way one day. right now, maybe i'm too selfish... or too full of stupid pride... and in my mind it makes me less of a person to feel that i can show love. my poor boyfriend. i don't know why he doesn't leave me. i wish i could be all these great things and feel as beautiful as this poem feels. sweet.
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cast off the hurt from your childhood. Look up radical forgiveness and let it set you free. Thats what I had to do and now I feel liberated totally.
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when you say look up radical forgiveness, do you mean... look it up in a dictionary? in a church? where... oh where...? I would love to feel liberated. I just have so much anger inside.
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Very nicely done and rich with love. My best wishes always.
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