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Light on Light

Why hold back when your body seeks to surrender to the light
Reveal to me the beauty of body perfected
I can hear you breathe sharp breathes of eager anticipation
Open to me the ampleness of your breasts
Feel my breath caress your neck
Hear my heartbeat pounding
eagerly wanting more
Hold back
Keep her waiting
wanting
Hands surrender to sensual searching
Breathe
Beg for more
Waiting eagerly
Urges heightening

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  • Jeremy0826 silver member
    October 29, 2008

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    Very beautiful and sensual words
    you've penned here. A very enjoyable
    read! Good luck to you here!




    Jeremy0826


    • RareFlower
      October 29, 2008
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      thank you for your comments to my poem. These are my first adult themed poems. glad you enjoyed it.


  • Sweet Impatience gold member
    October 29, 2008
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    this is a beautiful & very sensual poem that you've written.

    good luck
    kat


  • Reptile Lady gold member
    October 29, 2008

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    Such a beautiful sensual poem
    Soft caresses in eager awaiting
    Best wishes Julie