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Steps

Luring
Undressing
Touching
Feeling
Kissing
Colliding
Loving
Fornicating
Releasing..

Euphoria!

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this is for the erotic challenge

A contest entry

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  • Ms Lez
    November 22, 2008
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    the poem tells about so many things in such a few words. its an excellent write


  • shimmer
    November 1, 2008

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    the words here were well chosen and leaves me with a feeling of warmth. don't ask because i couldn't explain


  • tanzanite
    November 1, 2008

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    Wonderfully done. I loved the last word. It just summed it all up for me. I think you did an amazing job with this one. Well done on a difficult challenge.


  • Master Ktulu silver member
    November 1, 2008

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    Euphoria!

    Just something about that word...makes this so much different and much better.

    Good luck

    **Master Ktulu**


  • Galaxy2
    October 29, 2008

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    'Luring'
    I'm allured...honey!
    'Undressing'
    a lovely sight...isn't it?
    'Touching'
    by all means, love!
    'Feeling'
    every tnch of me...
    'Kissing'
    lustfully and erotically...
    'Loving'
    leading to perfect satisfaction
    'fornicating'
    As you wish, hottie!
    'Releasing'
    An indication that we did a good job together...


  • Riftkin gold member
    October 29, 2008
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    beautiful words spoken here.

    you are amazing dear poet.

    Riftkin

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