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Son of Man


Son Of Man

An eternal soul embodied
On a preliminary mission came
To give freedom to the prisoned
To deliver our souls from shame

The son of a poor carpenter
And a humble virgin
Grew up to a wise teacher
Condemning the old rugged scripture

Mercy and love were his preaching’s
To a cruel hearted nation
Cured the sick, rose up the dead
Delivered the souls from damnation

His words with sovereignty dazzled
Pharicies, commandors and priests
Too blind to comprehend his mission
They plotted on him a vicious scheme

With 30 coins of silver
The disciple sold his master
Delivered the son of man
To the hands of cruel laughter

Betrayed by his student
Denied by his disciples
Mocked by the nation
He’s left to the verdict of rivals

His gentle flesh harshly lashed
With sharp edged whips
His Holy crown enwreathed
Thorns of thistle darkened his glimpse

Then brutally upon a cross was thrown
Nailed with rusty nails his joints
Screams of hurt his soul moaned
Bloods flowing from head to kneels

His sufferings were our salvation
From hell’s flaming fires
He suffered and died to deliver us
From the damnation of our desires















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  • Violinstrings silver member
    November 2, 2008
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    very nice

    the content with ryhthmn and rhyme
    good vocab and words


  • ourgirlFriday
    October 31, 2008

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    Lovely!

    Wonderful write; you really have talent! I hope you'll join us in the Catholic Christian Support group. Lovely, emotion-packed poem!


    • mystic
      November 2, 2008
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      Thank you

      I'm glad this poem applealed to you,I've penned it with all my heart,and I'm proud to join your groupGod bless...(f)


  • pumpykin
    October 28, 2008
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    WOW

    This is amazing...beautiful..just wow

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