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Perfect robbery

You see I have never tasted a punking,
And a pie I've never even layd my eyes on,
So this halloween I will do the perfect robbery.
 
My neighbour is all wrinkely and pale,
They have spent so many years underground,
So they would hardly notice my evil plan.
 
 I have realized that every year on that day,
Some puts out big, orange punkins,
So I will steal one from the grave!
 
When I get my punking in the house,
I will start baking the perfect pie,
And for the first time I will taste it!
 
I wonder if my neighbours will get mad,
But they are rarely up and walking,
And the only time they say hello...
 
...Is when they move in

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1. Write me a poem about what the perfect crime to commit on Halloween would be --- no pre writes for this option.
My neighbour is the cemetery, in case you were wondering.

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  • Stardust100
    November 9, 2008
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    Never tasted punkin pie here either.


  • Wolf Mistress silver member
    November 9, 2008

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    Please call me if the punkinpie is ready...I've never tasted it too...


    XXJeannette


  • Poetic Tasha Moderators member
    November 5, 2008

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    awesome
    thanks for taking the time to write something new!
    best of luck

    Tasha


  • Maxboy gold member
    November 3, 2008

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    The perfect crime for Halloween you have here. You do have a lot of fun with your neighbors, don't you.

    Well Done....Best wishes in the contest.


  • countrybabe gold member
    November 2, 2008

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    Good

    This is cool. I liked this piece very much. Very creative. Well done and good luck in the contest.

    Countrybabe

  • Warrior7
    November 2, 2008
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    lol, well matey this is different and very much enjoyable
    good stuff


  • catz Moderators member
    October 31, 2008

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    A very entertaining poem, Merosa. I guess if one of my punkin's were to be stolen I'd be flattered tat anyone would feel it ws good enough to steal.

    I like the humorous twist on living next to a cematery

    Good luck in the contest

    Dee


    • Meroza
      November 1, 2008
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      Well, they don't sell 'em at the market so I got to get them from somewhere


  • J aime Coudre silver member
    October 31, 2008

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    I like this humorous outlook on living next to a cemetary. I think it would be kind od creepy but you make it sound interesting... and at least you wont have any resistance to your crime

    Good luck in the contest


    • Meroza
      November 1, 2008

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      I'm known for my weird way of living, and sure it was creepy to think that my neighbour lives six feet under and hadn't seen the sun in years but after a while I started having fun with that thought ^_^


  • Sweet Impatience gold member
    October 31, 2008

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    first of all this poem is excellent .. and secondly its a bit on the creepy side too.. I suppose having a cemetery for a neighbor is the part that is creepy to me..

    good luck in the contest
    mommy


    • Meroza
      October 31, 2008
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      hehe, you get a new sense of humor surounded by dead people.
      But yet again, I may move soon if I find a new place and I will miss it a lot!

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