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Trick Or Treat

Treats of red candied apples on a stick
Revenge all your enemies with a trick
Incubus and Dracula are on the prowl
Chanting witches and werewolves howl
Kids begging for candy door to door

Over head full moon, vampire bats soar
Resounding laughter echoes through air

Tales told of frightful monsters to beware
Run through streets as they masquerade
Boys and girls march in the costume parade
Another Halloween night about to end soon
Twinkling stars shine upon yellow full moon


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  • AngelEyes13
    October 29, 2008
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    LOVE THE IMAGERY AND THE RHYME! Thanks soo much for entering my contest and HAPPY HALLOWEEN!


    • Sandygram
      November 1, 2008
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      Thank you for the nice comment. Take care. Sandy

  • SoulWhispher
    October 29, 2008

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    This really meets the prompt, you have woven such a great magical tale of halloween, it really reaches out to the reader, you never cease to amaze, blessings with love John

    • Sandygram
      October 30, 2008
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      Thank You John

      Good Morning to you. Thank you for this nice comment. It is most appreciated my friend. You take care. Blessings with love. Sandy


  • Rend the Veil gold member
    October 28, 2008

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    That is

    Sweet SandyGram. I love those old fashion Holloween.
    great flow good luck in the contest!

    Blessings

    Rend

    • Sandygram
      October 30, 2008
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      Good Morning Rend

      So nice to have you stop by. Always enjoy your comments. Thank you and have a wonderful day. Hugs and Smiles.

      Bless You
      Sandy


  • Poetic-Theorem gold member
    October 28, 2008

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    Lovely imagery you have penned
    I can just see all the boys and girls enjoying Halloween night...candies, costumes, parties, etc...
    You always bring so much to the reader in every write
    Love this piece
    Take care
    Many blessing

    David

    • Sandygram
      October 30, 2008
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      Good Morning Dear David

      Always enjoy reading your thoughtful comments. Hugs and Smiles to brighten your day. You are always in my prayers. Take care.

      Peace and Grace,
      Love You,
      Sandy


  • dustytiger
    October 28, 2008

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    i really like this a lot, it's so happy and fun just like halloween! it reminds me of trick or treating as a kid, good luck in the contest!


    • Sandygram
      October 30, 2008
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      Lovely Comment

      Thank you for stopping by. I appreciate your very nice comment. Take care.

      Sandy


  • Silent Cougar Moderators member
    October 28, 2008

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    Very nicely done Sis. Bringing home the fun times when scaring is a giggle and the kids have fun doing it . Now all I have to do is find my mask and come chapping your door,,i love candy apples..

    • Sandygram
      October 30, 2008
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      Good Morning Dear Brother

      Hello Mike, Your comment was wonderful to read. It always brings a smile to hear from you. I hope you and your family are well and happy across the Big Pond!
      I send you blessings from Pennsylvania. You take care.

      Peace and Grace,
      Sandy

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