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Can u see it?

Can you see it when you look in my eyes
How much I love you?

Can you feel it
when I touch you?

Can you sense it
when you hold me close?

when I look at you
Can you see it in my smile?

Can you hear it in my voice
when I tell you i love you?

I do love you and I just wonder if you
can see it? feel it? sense it? hear it?

tell me if you can because it's true when I
look in your eyes

When I touch you

When I hold you

When I look at you

When I smile at you

When I tell you

Every time I tell you I love you I mean it
with everything I have and with all my heart.

this is to my husband

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  • Pisces rainbow gold member
    October 29, 2008

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    this is precious
    love is there anything that feels the same
    a feeling of completion
    two into one
    oh so beautiful my friend
    well done
    God bless you...


  • samantha jean
    October 28, 2008
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    I like the last line very much. It's sweet and straight forward.