touch me right there,make my skin
burn
your touch sets my soul on fire
now its your turn
i want to touch you,
tease you
taking my time to
please you
let me burn your spot
down
listen to my heart
pound
that's what you do to
me
take me to
ectasty
and no i don't want to
stop
until we reach the
top
a final kiss
from bliss
and im engulf in
her flames
A contest entry
- What if I was your girl??? by XxLuna-DuskxX.
550 points, ended November 5, 2008, 15 entries
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Comments
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very beautifully written
thanks for the entry!! -
I love the shape of this poem and in a sense the flow. Well done
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this made me feel all...i dont want to say it winks*
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