My eyes are closed,
There’s nothing left to see,
There’s no one to hold
Except for the soul inside of me,
Today I’m gone,
Tomorrow I am
But for now I’m stone dead.
I’m stone dead [x3]
Yes, I’m stone dead
My fingers rest on my hand,
My body rests in the coffin,
There’s no one left in this land,
'cause they’re all, all stone dead.
No one to see,
No one to love,
No one to hold,
No one to be,
No one’s longer in demand
'cause I’m stone dead,
You’re stone dead,
They’re all stone dead
Yes we’re all stone dead.
My eyes are closed,
My fingers rest on my hand,
Now I am stone…
I’m stone dead,
No one’s longer in demand
'cause they’re all stone dead,
Yes they’re all stone dead,
You’re stone dead,
I’m stone dead,
Every body’s stone dead,
Stone dead!!
Author notes
I like putting up pictures to go with my poetry/ lyrics. 
About the picture: It's from Deviant Art - http://idamo.deviantart.com/art/Guitar-74857498
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The picture does go with the lyrics. I like it. Stone dead, I can agree with that. I like the flow. Nice job Good luck -
i can totally see a major band rocking to these lyrics! i can realte to them and would definitly buy the song! Awesome Ylova!! My kind of music!
becca
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I can hear the rock and role of this, lol. Great lyrics, I liked the repeatation of 'stone dead', but it's so dark. Best of luck to you in the contest and thanks for sharing this wonderful song.
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Oh wow. I could picture some people head banging to the lyrics of this song..I've never tried writing lyrics, so this appeals to me even more..good job with this one..and good luck in the contest.
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and a fitting picture it is.
An awesome song. I did stumble a bit on this line "No one’s longer in demand" but that could just be me. Maybe if I read it over again...
either way, excellent job with this.
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Brilliant lyrics you have written here hun
Stone dead rhythm
Best wishes and good luck in the contest
Julie
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do you write music to your lyrics?
i have a friend here named Zappa.
You should look him up because he
writes lyrics, too, and he's such a
nice person. I love this.
Love, Lane
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I CAN HEAR THE MUSIC!!!!!
Wonderful, emotional lyrics! I can close my eyes and hear a guitar playing!
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For some reason I couldn't stop thinking about Journey and "Stone In Love!" It's my generation, we grew up on that. Yours was very original and carries a damned hard undertow...
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The title itself gave it somewhat an eerie feeling, something like that of death melodic metal. Dark, demonic in its own way. this poem is more than just a rock song. I'd say, platinum!
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