True love

When I wake up and look out the window I think about you.

Each and every day I think about you.

You are the reason I get up each day.

You are the one I want to be with.

I want to be with you for all eternity.

You complete me.

You are part of me and i am part of you.

Alone we are nothing but together we are everything.

I love you and forever will.

A contest entry

True Love by DawnKestrel. 1050 points, ended November 4, 2008, 34 entries
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Beauty Of Silence
November 25, 2008

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wow. this is so simple, yet so beautiful. those words were amazing. wow, for an 11 yea old, you're doing pretty great. keep penning
DawnKestrel
October 31, 2008
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Very good. Good luck in my contest.
MrCrepsley
October 29, 2008
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OMG!!! THAT WAS AMAZIN' LIL BRO!!! GOOD LUCK WITH FUTURE POEMS
TOEchikira
October 28, 2008
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dont listen to captainredd!! love lasts forever and ever!!your poem is beautiful and spoken from the heart and it is truly amazing and deep. it made my heart melt. especially amazing since a boy wrote it. most guys cant get their feelings out like this. i love it! keep writing. <3
Dancing the Rumba
October 28, 2008

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This is really nice. I hope you and your loved one stay together for ever and ever! I love reading love poems, and this one was a great addition to my list of the best!
~Emmz
Commodore Rouge
October 28, 2008
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Nice, but I get the feeling that you're trying to take this to a level that you're not capable of yet, though. I truly don't believe that an 11-year-old can be in "true love". Sorry to break it to you, but you're not gonna stick together. Probably. But oh well, I am quite fond of the font you chose for this.
DawnKestrel
October 28, 2008
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Nice job.