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The Most

Thin curtain of happenstance seperates this world from the realm of ghosts,
Reality only symbolizes the things we despise the most.

Whether it's from border to border, or from coast to coast,

Ineitable outcomes overwhelm the obvios boast.

Tides might change, currents of winds might differ,

But we must not ever forget the things we eternally decipher.

Either coming from the dead, or arising form something that seems livelier,

We must forever go get the symbol we admire the most,

North, west, east..., or south-sider.

What's the first (1st) thought that came across you're mind when you finished reading this poem?

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  • brokenheartedbaby
    October 30, 2008

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    I like that, I got from it that maybe you tryna say that no matter what coast or where were from we suffer from the same circumstances or happiness? I'd like for you to tell me if I was wrong or not but thats just what I interpreted.

  • loafy
    October 28, 2008

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    My first though that comes to me when i read this poem, was a sea of ghosts. Haha, yeah, the great beyond, the restless waves, the deap blue, call it all you want.