For all the times
I thought you were true
I look in the future
and see noone but me.
Belive me please
when I say
I'm done with it all
so just back away.
I'm lost in my own demention
fighting all the bad memories
and I swear you just want to
Kill me slowly and end it all.
Belive me when I say
it's over I'm done.
I don't care what you say anymore
I want you out of my life
A contest entry
- because i feel like it.... (options) by VerminVomit.
1300 points, ended November 2, 2008, 23 entries
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Comments
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I really like the part that reads
"I'm lost in my own demention
fighting all the bad memories
and I swear you just want to
Kill me slowly and end it all."
This poem is really good!
<3 One-Broken-Heart
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Good job. Not my favourate, but deffinatley good. I love the last line of of the last verse, its a good line. Keep writing XD
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