A child is like a heavenly flower
Blossoming in heaven
Whose seed you planted in your belly that Precious Hour
And God diligently tends in His garden.
Day by day the baby grows and blossoms
From a seedling it becomes a Rosette on your very bosom
A child is like a heavenly flower
Sweet and dainty;
Little floral bouquets they are.
Their little faces are carnations, roses and daisies
A child is like a flower
Blossoming in heaven,
Whose seed you planted in your belly at conception
God waters the seeds with His love and breathes on them
His Spirit of Creation,
Transforming them all into colorful bouquets of children.
A contest entry
- Maternity by SeaWithYourHeart.
700 points, ended November 18, 2008, 15 entries
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Comments
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wow what imagery! thats dwas a joy to read!thankyou so much for your entry
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I would have to say great poem for sure loved the images and how you expressed every aspect of how a child is to to some. But I have not met the child tha tyou wrote about in this poem. Most of them I have known in my life have been lying and trouble makers! hehe
So I would not be able to fully grasp every line of text in this poem. Can only wish that every child was described by these words but they are not.
However this is a very good poem and one can hope that one day all the youngsters would be just as you explained and atleast strive to be close.
D. Clark
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