1)
i am holding a mouth in my palm and watching it shrivel.
the outside of it's skin is stained with a purplish red lipstick and i am
choking on the insides and i rip it apart and play with the blood that
spills from the sides of your face.
2)
you are clutching her to your chest and i am
crying but the tears won't come out of my eyes and it's like
that time i stood in a bathroom and food just fell back out of my
stomach and i couldn't control it and you were watching me but
you wouldn't help because you weren't really sure if you
wanted to get too attached.
3)
i am laying in my bed and touching my stomach and
i can feel a kick and all of a sudden there is just
blood everywhere and my mother is standing there
and i am trying to hide and trying to get her to help me
but she is just so disgusted that she
turns away and puts her face behind my
pillow.
4)
i am standing at the edge of a river and you are
behind me.
i lean and you, push me over.
and i watch with my mouth open in a silent
scream and i fall off the bridge and you
laugh.
5)
"i never loved you."
Author notes
option VI.
these are just a jumbled mix of a few of my fears.
i don't know if that's what you wanted, but it's the best i could do?
i was going to write about a moment, but i have the memory of a goldfish and so
that wouldn't really work 
sorry this took so long.
ilyyy.♥
p.s. if it's not what you wanted, tell me and i'll write something else. promiseee.<3
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Yes, these are rather fearful things. Interestingly, they all symbolize fears of abandonment in one form or another . . . are you aware of that?
Anyway, this is well written. Your imagery just pops off the screen.
Garrison
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-the outside of it's skin is stained with a purplish red lipstick and i am
its.
i like this.
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you are terrified that nobody will help you? this is so disturbing, i love it.
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I think the part that had the biggest effect on me was the third part about getting pregos and my mom finding out. They way you wrote about that was so raw. It was thick with some many different emotions all revolving around horror and panic. I just love that part so much. Every word you used was perfect to convey that moment.
You did an excellent job on writing on your fears. They were so powerful and I felt as if they were my own.
all my love
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hey I'm sorry it took me so long to getting around to this but could you take a look at the rules one more time hun. After you do let me know and I'll comment back on this properly! Thanks sweetpea!
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So this is a list of your fears? If so it's very descriptive and powerful. Made me scared myself. *hides under desk*. Excellent job! I love your writing style. Good luck in the contest you've entered!
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whoa that was some really intense images hun damn, and it scared me a bit but it definatly invoked strong meanings <3 ily!
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