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don't leave me

as you stroke my cheek
I try to keep my tears from rolling
I know I'm such a freak
but you're just my everything

and you really can't believe
that you deserve to live
and I don't want you to leave
and my heart is all I can give

I can't let you go
everyone's gonna cry
baby just say no
I don't want you to die

you think your life,
is just a waste of time
so you end everyday with your knife
cutting, you say it's your only way to feel fine

but don't leave me, please don't leave me darlin
life without you is impossible here
I'll do anything, say anything
just to keep you with me my dear

'bout my best friend, again....*Sigh* we sure can be depressed...

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  • XxHidden in LifexX
    October 28, 2008
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    sometimes to be depressed is good other times its bad,lol!
    Good poem keep the great work!


  • peregrin
    October 28, 2008

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    This is so touching, so heartfelt, so emotional.
    Talk to me anytime hunny,
    I am here if you need someone.

    I can't let you go
    everyone's gonna cry
    baby just say no
    I don't want you to die

    the part that just hits home...
    gosh golly gee,
    you write really well.


  • Unforgotten
    October 28, 2008
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    blah

    nothing special... and rhymes about cutting are so... melodramatic? attention wanting?

    write one of encouragement--not a depressing one.