as you stroke my cheek
I try to keep my tears from rolling
I know I'm such a freak
but you're just my everything
and you really can't believe
that you deserve to live
and I don't want you to leave
and my heart is all I can give
I can't let you go
everyone's gonna cry
baby just say no
I don't want you to die
you think your life,
is just a waste of time
so you end everyday with your knife
cutting, you say it's your only way to feel fine
but don't leave me, please don't leave me darlin
life without you is impossible here
I'll do anything, say anything
just to keep you with me my dear
'bout my best friend, again....*Sigh* we sure can be depressed...
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sometimes to be depressed is good other times its bad,lol!
Good poem keep the great work! -
This is so touching, so heartfelt, so emotional.
Talk to me anytime hunny,
I am here if you need someone.
I can't let you go
everyone's gonna cry
baby just say no
I don't want you to die
the part that just hits home...
gosh golly gee,
you write really well.


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nothing special... and rhymes about cutting are so... melodramatic? attention wanting?
write one of encouragement--not a depressing one.



