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Nothing

I bite my tounge until I bleed,
I cutt my arms until its numb,
i claw my face until theres marks.
I scar my body because what's on the inside is more than scars,
There's gouges,
Theres tares,
Theres fallen pieces that have disinigrated
There's nothing apart of my life.
I have no sanity,
I have guilt,
I have shame,
But when i call out,
they answer to my name

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  • Utopian Evolution
    November 12, 2008

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    A very saddened piece filled with what most teenagers even us young adults feel going through all the turmoil that throws itself our way in life.


  • Abstract Image
    November 1, 2008
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    ooh very dark and very sad...i loved it. thanks for entering.


  • kittie31
    October 28, 2008
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    i really like it it makes a lot of scence and well i am the ssame way im kat