The lights of day
Seduce my dead skin
Caress my cold body
Burn my very soul
The darkness of night
Feed my interest of life
Give my mind a reason
Reach for my cold beating heart
I sleep at dawn
I wake at sunset
I love the Lunar light
As much as I love the Solar
Be my mother
Be my father
Be my everything
I want my heart
To give into the warm sun
Because I'm sick of the cold moon
Author notes
albinoblacksheep720
Amaranthine Lover
A contest entry
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Comments
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I like the darkness of your poem
. Very well done.
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"I love the Lunar light
As much as I love the Solar
Be my mother
Be my father
Be my everything"
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"To give into the warm sun
Because I'm sick of the cold moon"
some awesome, creative stuff going on there! -
Great poem i like the ues of the darkness!
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I love it! It's dark and there is a lot of imagery. I think it was very well written.
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Nice choice of words :-)
I like the use of darkness not too but just enough.
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Excellent!!!
I love the imagery of this poem.
Excellent write.
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I love how the opinions switch in this poem. Great write. Good luck! ~Hollis
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i like the ending
great write
love always
erica
xx
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