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A Tall Poem

Come and write a poem with me
About my Teddy _____  
He’s as cute as he can be
So sit down in your _____

Pick up your pen, fill in the blanks
My Teddy _____
Will give you thanks

We’ll write about how we'll grow _____
As busy as a _____

As frisky as a little ______
And taller than a ______

Remember that when Teddy grows
We will grow tall too
For Teddy has the cutest ______
And I think you do too

 

 

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  • mysticstorm gold member
    October 31, 2008

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    How wonderfully adorable and creative...very crafty you are...so sweet and perfect for any child...congrat's on the will deserved Silver...
    Love,
    mystic


  • ishelicious
    October 31, 2008
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    cute!


  • Swan song gold member
    October 29, 2008
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    LOL this was cute Skillfull funny and clever


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    October 29, 2008

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    Absolutely adorable!!! You are amazing sis.. I would never have thought up something like this.

    Too cute


    ♥


  • princessleejwctlvr2
    October 29, 2008
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    You have such amazing and wonderful ideas!! This is perfect sis!!


  • nordicsky silver member
    October 29, 2008

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    Oh wonderful! This is just what the competition asked for and is perfect for a five year old.
    I think children should be encouraged to read and write poetry.

    Of course, I filled in all the blanks wondering if there was a subliminal message hidden within.

    I hope you win.
    Regards, Peter


  • Rebekah-Ann silver member
    October 29, 2008

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    Aneka LOVES this poem so much! I had to print out 5 copies. This is exactly the kind of poem that captures her imagination and interest! Thank you for taking part and helping me to encourage litriture within this young mind!

    Please note:
    Please be patient with judging, the preliminary finalists are in no specific order at this stage. More cups will be added and the order updated on the judging day!


    Rebekah & Aneka


  • Nangaleema
    October 29, 2008
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    aww sweet. what a nifty idea. enjoyed. - NANGALEEMA


  • Faeryn
    October 28, 2008

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    Awww! This is such a cute poem! I'm definitly going to print this out and fill it out with my neighbor who is just learning how to read.
    and love,
    Tay


  • Rovingone gold member
    October 28, 2008

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    Ah, isn't this just sweet! You always know how to prompt a big smile in even the dullest times. You're terrific and so is this poem!


  • Whispering Wind Moderators member
    October 28, 2008

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    SO VERY SWEET

    As always my sweet LittleBlueStar you have penned a wonderful master piece...makes me feel like a kid again thank you sweetheart for the smile


  • Sue Cardwell gold member
    October 28, 2008

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    I love this and so will Aneka, you have a wonderful knack of appealing to the younger reader...gold for sure

    Love
    Sue


  • melphleg gold member
    October 28, 2008

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    aww

    Aww. I love it. Love the pics. Love the poem. Warmed my heart. I love children so this just makes me smile. It makes my day read. Thank you, my beautiful friend.


  • MJ Donnelly gold member
    October 28, 2008
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    Aw, soooo cuuuute!


  • sailor ptolema
    October 28, 2008
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    super cute \.


  • cricketjeff gold member
    October 28, 2008

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    You are a master at this sort of poetry, keeping things exactly right for young children is very difficult I find yet your poetry for them always reads so naturally, great stuff

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