You hold my hand
and chase away my fears,
Lift up my face
and wipe away my tears,
You said,
'Never have I loved like this,
but always have i dreamed of this'
And those are the words
that have rang through my head
from the very first day.
I can ony hope,
we can carry on this way.
A contest entry
- Write about a person. by samantha jean.
600 points, ended October 31, 2008, 28 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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This is definitely sweet.
"You said,
'Never have I loved like this,
but always have i dreamed of this'"
Perfect.
Great write, thank you for the entry in my contest, and good luck! -
Sounds like you definitely have a keeper there -- wiping away your tears and so on. Good luck with it or maybe you don't need luck.
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