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Thoughts Behind Automatic Doors

You beat.
You breath.
You love me.
And I love you.

Counting seconds in my head,
mentally carving out the wall.
Miss holding you in our bed,
miss hearing you call
out my name, soft and clear
willing me to lay beside you,
and hold me tight to keep me near.
And there's nothing else to do.
Could lay here with you forever,
need and wanting nothing more.
Together through this life we endeavor,
waiting for what else is in store.

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Hmmmm, this is unfinished, I just couldn't get it done so I'm putting it up here.

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  • A-Sky-Lark
    October 28, 2008

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    whoa, hey nick, seriously, i could go on reading your stuff but you post pretty rarely. Meh well..
    I like it, even tho it's unfinished, you say