Once green and full upon the trees,
leaves now fall amidst a breeze.
The Season's change takes our breath,
to Winter's door and Summer's death.
Author notes
photo by daviscth
A contest entry
- #153 Autumn photo prompt by daviscth.
400 points, ended October 29, 2008, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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Ah..you re a painter here..bringing the soothing scenario of this great nature..wonderful work ..thanks for sharing..
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Beautiful words, images, colours and pictures. Another wonderful poem it is what you do the best writing. You have a special and unique gift. You have such a strong individual voice.
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love this sam it's so you
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Beautifully rhymed, it's so nice to see you back around again, i'd not seen you for ages. Good luck in the contest.
C
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short, sweet and very beautiful, best wishes in the contest.
sooty
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You did a wonderful job with my picture and I loved the imagery your words paints. Thanks so much for your entry.
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As always, a well thought out poem with wonderful imagery. What a lovely picture you have painted with only a few short words. Best of luck in the contest.
Joan
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this was so good.. not only with the changing theme, but with the imagery you use.
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a beautiful write. something that truly speaks of change.
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Short and good write
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