Well I've always wanted true love but somehow I've always failed
To find the man who'd always go my bail
As I look across the room tonight I wonder helplessly
If the man I need is looking back at me
I wonder who will be the next one
That next man who'll sweep me off my feet
I wonder if he'll be the last one for me
Will he break my heart or love me tenderly
Well I hope someday I find the man who'll give my heart a break
Always want me near and crave the love we make
Now will he be a friend of mine or maybe someone new
I'm so lonely Lord I only wish I knew
Author notes
Written January 29th, 2004
A contest entry
- Fun Fun for everyone! by Jenn-Uh.
300 points, ended April 7, 2004, 7 entries
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Nice...the ever-present search for love
good luck...good write
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this is really cute! awesome write. thanks for your applaud on my poem you have no idea how good that feels!
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Nice job! I really enjoyed this poem cause I can relate to it.
As I look across the room tonight I wonder helplessly
If the man I need is looking back at me
I often think that myself. Is the person I'm destined to be with watching me? This poem sort of reminds me of that new song by Reba. Can't think of the name of it, but it fits along with this poem. Nice work! -
Nice work! I love it! Excellent job and thanks.
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DixieChick~
Hey! Nice write! Keep your head up you'll find someone... believe me... I always said I will never find someone and I ended up with a couple people... You just have to keep your head up! Hope to see more of you, and please return the favor.
~!~Babie Gurl~!~
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This is outstanding kiddo.. I love it to death.
"Well I hope someday I find the man who'll give my heart a break
Always want me near and crave the love we make"
That's awesome. I dunno how you come up with that stuff. It gives me chillbumples! lol.
lya&fnmw!
-Jen
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