Resist the urge to become a snake
Self pity is not righteous
Make tracks with genuine knowledge
The world is a mysterious race
Don’t be fooled by the maths of invention
Each parcel should be different
The time it takes to find your courage
Is the time it took to loose your identity
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I read this days ago, but I never had a chance to leave my two cents' worth. "Make tracks with genuine knowledge / The world is a mysterious race." I think we can all identify with that piece of philosophy; I sure do. There is a quality in the words that gives them their truth, nothing hidden or obscure. I can taste the piety here, not in a religious sense, but more of a devoted essence. We should take them with the casualness that life gives us. Always, I await the next one.
Brit
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One of my favourite work of yours.Simple yet very meaningfull.Love it
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The imagerey used and the ideas implied in the first two stanzas are very fascinating and rich.It really does draw you in.I felt the last stanza was a bit unecessary, you said what you needed to say in the excellent first two stanzas.
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A uniqueness piece
Sends a message within
Loved the title and the rest flows well together
Questioning ... and the answers given
Best wishes Julie
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Love it love it love it,
This is so true, and the way you ended it was brilliant.
Well done
All the best to you
Ken
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