If you look to Nature
you would but know
we are joined in its mystical flow
within the storm that pales the sky
run fathomless emotions in you and I
like the Ocean the Soul drifts free
reflect and you will see
The Beauty and the Turmoil are we
Author notes
I'm late sorry thought it ended in November .. Oh well ..just love the prompts ...good luck to all the entries ..I love reading too *S*
A contest entry
- it starts with one. by aanika.
910 points, ended November 13, 2008, 17 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
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rhumbs up
like the Ocean the Soul drifts free
what a great line, love the whole thing
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too short, in my opinion.
I don't like the random capitalization.
sorry, but I also asked for no rhyme specifically.
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oops got to get glasses....its short because its actually inscribed in a rock face on a painting. it was a fast entry the prompt actually reminded me of it . I will have to take out the random capitalization though, I don't think that was actually in the painting ... thanks
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your title is:
like the ocean.
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