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finding love


cheap desires never sell
old displays are worn and discolored
shopping for love can be tedious
it's new infatuation or an old flicker

stealing love won't pamper all
feeling less may solve the problem
borrowed sentiments lie to some
tears won't solve the cheap dilemma

dreams are better with no interruptions
floating passion lasts so much longer

Author notes

prompt:
#2. Borrowed sentiments from bargain dream store.

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  • penman gold member
    October 29, 2008
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    Wonderful

    Very well done. Best of luck in the contest.


  • apropos
    October 28, 2008
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    oh i like this! the last stanza says it all.