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When I Grow Up

When I grow up I'm going to be,

the happiest girl you'll ever see.

I'll stay up all night if I feel like it,

  at breakfast eat a banana split.

I'll clean my room or maybe not,

I may not give it any thought.

Friends will fill up every room,

I won't allow a bit of gloom.

 

We'll play games all day long,

and maybe even sing a song

I'll serve up pizza with favorite drink,

we'll laugh out loud and eat in sync.

When I grow up I'll be the boss,

and all the rules I'm going to toss.

I'll be free to run and play,

or laze around the entire day.

 

 

 

 

 

A contest entry

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  • Mickie27
    November 11, 2008

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    Oh I love the fact you took me back to my childhood. It is my birthday tomorrow and I remembered back in childhood all the parties I had. I love eating I just wish we didn't have to wear what we eat. Tomorrow I am not bothered about dieting I am just going to enjoy myself. I loved this poem it was very cheerful and nice.

  • Maninblack
    November 3, 2008

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    Very pleasing picture

    Thanks for the nostalgia trip. It brought back memories of when my two daughters ruled the house. Come to think of it, I think they still do. Nice portrait of innocence.

  • Yvette Champ gold member
    October 31, 2008
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    Cute!


  • ishelicious
    October 31, 2008
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    hey congrats for winning a gold love your cute poem with cute gif pics! keep up the good work!


  • Aneka Bellingan
    October 31, 2008

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    the pictures are moving!!!!!!!!!!!! I love this!!!!!!

    maybe play games, eat pizza, and ice-cream and be the boss of my room and the boss of everything I eat in the house. or lie and kick my legs like this!!

    Thank you for entering my contest!!!

    @nnie

  • Topnotchsy
    October 30, 2008

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    Nice write. Really captured the innocence of childhood here. Well done and best of luck in the contest.


  • Rebekah-Ann silver member
    October 29, 2008

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    She is laughing!!! "I also want to be a boss!" She loves the images and I had to read this poem about 4 times before she started drawing herself on a piece of paper.

    Oh, and now princess wants pizza. This is a great entry for a 5 year old! You caught her attention and did great with the prompt!


    Please note:
    Thank you for this lovely entry and please be patient with judging, the preliminary finalists are in no specific order "yet"...




    Rebekah & Aneka


  • citrisaturn
    October 28, 2008

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    That was so cute... Brought me back to my childhood days and wanting to grow up... i miss those days


  • Harrisham Minhas gold member
    October 28, 2008
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    This is a very sweet and fun-filled write.
    Well-displayed.




  • daviscth
    October 28, 2008

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    Boy do I ever remember feeling just like this!!! WHAT HAPPENED!!! I think someone lied to us about how being an adult really is. You did a wonderful job with this, good luck in the contest.


  • missygreendaychimp
    October 28, 2008
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    hehe sweet [:

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