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embracing

my eyes are closed to your desire
temptress dreams lead me on
entice your love with purity's innocence
cover anticipation with almost modesty

breathless pictures await your touch
fingers stroke what some cannot have
accept the longing as my one gift
longing for more creates temptation

two can share the bitter semblance
love cannot bloom without more

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photo prompt #1 from photobucket.com

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  • Jeremy0826 silver member
    October 29, 2008

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    This is just lovely! Well done, I really enjoyed
    reading your entry. Good luck to you here!




    Jeremy0826


  • Sweet Impatience gold member
    October 29, 2008

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    You did a great job with the prompt. I like the second stanza the most.. the imagery is great throughout this poem.

    good luck
    kat