Dear friend
Please say what's on your mind
I've noticed you don't laugh the way you used to
Ive seen you cry so many tears but why?
i feel so helpless
why do you sit in silence?
is it to fight the pain you feel each day
i know you think your not pretty but dear friend
your so beautiful inside
dear friend am here for you
i know am not much help
but i'm willing to try my
best to help you go on
together i promise we'll make it through
don't feel like your all alone
cos friend i'll always be there
for you!
Author notes
not reli a poem just summit i quickly wrote after a friend telling me somthing lol xx
A contest entry
- ... Friendship ... by lost.and.alone.
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this is on the song "dear friend" by stacie orrico.
u copied her exact words.
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Thanks for entering!
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thanks xx
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thanks xx
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Great
It was amazing free verse and I can relate and feel you have great talent.
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thanks x
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Canny Poem Chuck xx
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lol thanks for your comment it means alot xxx
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this is a great poem. and yes, it is really a poem. lol. its freeverse. lol. i'm not trying to be a smart-ass or anything so don't get offended please?
). well again, amazin write.
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