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Empathy

cinder in my heart;
flash before my eyes.
understandings fall apart;
alone to reminisce why.

fathom my empathy for you;
i live with a similar disease.
give them something as we do;
an understanding that it's not easy.

look at me with despair.
it makes me smile.
don't ask me to care
when you never went the extra mile.

Author notes

just a quick poem...
i think it's a little contradictory...
i'm not sure the message i really want to get through, but this will be good enough for now...

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  • DogFish silver member
    March 6
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    "a little contradictory..."?
    Every day the sunrises, everything is contradictoty!