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Judas

it's not the way you said my name
it's knowing you'll never say it again
i miss you

i don't know where to start with you
knowing you have my heart with you
i need you

couldn't i be someone else
be introduced to your old self
i love you

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This is as much as i got out, but damn it, it's a start.

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  • ArrowCobain
    January 23
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    my god, i saw him
    he looked three quarters dead
    and he was so bad i had to turn my head
    you beat him so hard that he was bent and lame
    and i know who everybody's going to blame
    i don't believe he knows i acted for our good
    i'd save him all this suffering if i could
    don't believe.....our good
    and i'd save him....if i could

    cut the confessions, forget the excuses
    i don't understand why you're filled with remorse
    all that you've said has come true with a vengeance
    the mob turned against him, you backed the right horse

    what you have done will be the saving of everyone
    you'll be remembered forever for this
    and, not only that, you've been paid for your efforts
    pretty good wages for one little kiss


    christ, i know you can't hear me
    but i only did what you wanted me to
    christ, i'd sell out the nation
    for i have been saddled with the murder of you
    i have been spattered with innocent blood
    i shall be dragged through the slime and the mud
    I HAVE BEEN SPATTERED WITH INNOCENT BLOOD
    I SHALL BE DRAGGED THROUGH THE SLIME AND THE
    SLIME AND THE
    SLIME AND THE MUD!

    i don't know how to love him
    i don't know why he moves me
    he's a man, he's just a man
    not a king, he is just the same
    as anyone i know
    he scares me so
    when he's cold and dead will he let me be?
    does he love me too? does he care for me?
    my mind is in darkness,
    god, god, i'm sick. i've been used.
    and you knew all the time.
    god, god
    i'll never know why you chose me for your crime

    YOU'RE SO BLOODY CHRIST!




  • mind of a dreamer
    November 2, 2008

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    baby this is a great start you don't need to a 100 words because these where the 10 best lines I could ever ask for!

  • crystalmeth
    October 28, 2008
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    it is a start.
    and it sounds great.
    <3