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myopic to more than oh my

feathers of trees
silhouette galaxies

day night pages
library lullaby

without flamed fantasy,
maker marker



eyelashes tattering
and resilient mattering





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  • Leonura
    October 28, 2008
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    Beautifully captivating. a truly wonderful write.


    • mbm
      October 28, 2008
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      Leonura thank you for your talent taking time with mine

      I'm glad it was poetic enough for you to remark.

      there was a suddeness to see the picture and each stanza, so I tried to go from ooh to elaborating ~
      called Carolyn


  • Lavender Butterfly silver member
    October 28, 2008
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    how creatively grasping... x


    • mbm
      October 29, 2008
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      SummerGypsy I'm happily shocked

      Thanks for the affirmation and award.

      forth from a careening picture...
      called Carolyn