As God lies still, sweet 666
Methamphetamine dreams and hopes
Wriggling the maggot bed
Of lucid frenzical intercourse
Mistresses of Lucifers bidding
Cavort with Angels in lakes of bliss
Seminal solutions for apathetical fools
In her dark abyss
Break the fragile vaginal petal
With spilled seed from the blackened phallus
While Mother Mary watches on
Face so cold and callous
Sweet 666, my God lies still
With a woman riding bareback
The serpent slithers between the thighs
Into her mildewed crack
Angel whores and Devil pimps
Saint Peter runs the brothel
Jesus Christ and the innkeepers wife
In a run down little hovel
On route 666
Author notes
The Hatt Trick - Blasphemy
A contest entry
- The Allpoetry Seven Contest (-1) by Dancing Feather.
1850 points, ended November 25, 2008, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Good rhyme and flow...
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Thanks Annie
This was for a contest, and my prompt was Blasphemy...
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wicked!!! very fucking powerful. having known several drug users i can relate to it. georgie recommended i read your work, i hope you dont mind me adding you. the recommendation was well worth it.
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This is a really twisted potent write, I enjoyed reading it.
Good luck in the contest.
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Thanks very much Glad you liked this write
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aaha yes...totally awesome! ahaha
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Thanks Glad you like this, and thanks for the coment
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heh heh...i giggled. i would have to say thaat the second stanza is the favorite here. i like the rhyme and the content...but in the 3rd stanza last line...the word 'so' seems a bit much...i think cold and callous make the point...but that's just me...so how've you been?
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Daughter!
Thanks for commenting
I've been pretty good, how are you keeping?
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I think I just crapped myself.
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That's a good thing for me....not so good for you
It means my work here is done, and you got to walk around smelling crap..lol
Glad you liked this write, and thanks for commenting.
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I can't tell you how weird this is, but as soon as i started reading this poem Rob Zombie starts on my radio, i love this poem thou, keep it flowing and good luck in the contest
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Thanks I love the Zombie!!!
Glad you like this, and thanks for the comment It's appreciated.
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aww this is beatifully written
this is amazing!
Loved it!
Keep up the great work
~LadyLuff~
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Thanks Luff
I'm glad you liked thjis write, and thanks for taking the time to comment
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I loved it
Great job Dmac keep up the good work
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Thanks Searra
Glad you enjoyed this, and thanks for the comment
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Blasphemy!! this has it in spades
I am so loving this poem from you, its dark its weird
and it makes sense.
Love the flow of this piece. and good luck in the contest
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Thanks Bell
Blasphemy...what else would you expect from The Lord Of Darkness?
Glad you liked this, and thanks for the comment
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i LOVE this haha. its great and its dark and i love it. and the background lol
Chels
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Thanks SoCo
Glad you like this I was asked to do Blasphemy...so I did, lol
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im lost.but thats the swimming talkings. i re comment tomorrow.
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lmao! It's fine
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WOW I loved this D it's just totally awesome I can't fault a single line, I love the themes and running metaphore throughout the piece great work xx
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Thanks Georgia
Glad you liked this write. It took some time to finish it, but I'm pleased with the overall product...I think
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I said it before... this is like the ultimate blaspheny lol!!!! The rape of the christian belief system penned right here lol I love it! You amaze us all D
Peace, Love, and darkness lol
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Thanks Bluey, lol
I amaze everyone...including myself sometimes Glad you like this write. I was asked for blasphemy...they got it
War, Famine, Strife and Eternal Darkness,
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WTF !?!
lol wow, youve surprised me with a new level of blasphemy
wtf else is in that dark twisted head of yours ?
you just made me want to be a psychonaut
very nice though
im impressed with this piece something i wouldnt even think to say, but that is why you are D
good job
~Rena
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Lmfao!
Of course.... With me writing it, there was little else you could expect with a prompt like Blasphemy
Glad you like this, and good luck on the psychonaut thing As for what else in my dark and twisted mind...who knows? Just stay tuned for the next installment
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HEY! I wanted to be a psychonaut dammit! Gr, my idea !!!! Tehe, jkjk, great write here D. They asked for Blasphemy and you shoved it in their ass Good job
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Thanks Whit
Glad you like this write Yeah, they asked for blasphemy...and this was my answer
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