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hush my baby

my glances not once wavers
as i silently watch you sleep
each movement each sigh
causes my heart to skip a beat

i look down and i watch you
every movement you make
almost scared to leave you
or even to look away

my every possessions
i would gladly surrender
for you are my life now
and i'll love you forever

the smell of fresh powered
with a mixture of oil
floats up on a breezes
as i hum lullabies

on tip toes i walk
across the room on cloud 9
hesitate in the doorway
for just one more peek

 

your sweet little face
blankets pulled up under your chin
the soft snoring vibrations
once more bring me to tears



 

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  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    November 3, 2008

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    Aww how precious! This is a lovely take on the prompt. I don't know this joy myself but I can certainly imagine it!


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    October 28, 2008
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    "Hush"

    Let me know if that works for you, otherwise I can give you another