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starlight falling

sitting out here among the stars
just relaxing
I happened to notice
a lot of falling stars.

Then I recalled
that you get a wish
with each falling star.

So I smiled
and thanked God
for giving me
all these wishes.

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  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    November 3, 2008
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    How lovely to have all our wishes granted! If only hey!

    Great take


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    October 28, 2008
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    "Starlight falling"

    Let me know if that works for you, otherwise I can give you another