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In Golden Eyes



Alone, I thought, I’d ever be,
the gods would not relent
My prayers fell on deafened ears
and hope was all but spent

But then one day my dreams took shape
a lady came on scene
She held the hope of life content
embraced in angel wings

On soft, full lips the treasures lay
awaiting me to try
To win her heart and thus the key
to love I could not buy

In golden eyes I realized
my dream had not expired
Though heaven bound it must have found
an earthly form attire

 

 

 

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Darlene, my dream come true

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  • Sandygram silver member
    April 3, 2009

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    Lovely Poem

    This was a beautiful poem for a beautiful lady. Such a delight to read, Take care, Sandy


  • Ellis gold member
    February 11, 2009

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    Outstanding ! ! !

    Terrific, Leo. I am real happy for you!

    Very well written poem. Darlene must be proud of you for writing it.


  • thechairman
    February 6, 2009

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    LOVE IT!

    God Has looked with great favor upon you, Brother in Law by giving you Heavens ANgel. God Bless you both, Your Brother in Law Lewis


  • Treasure 5 gold member
    January 18, 2009

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    awesome

    Thank you Leo I loved this poem. as well as all your poems. After making you the dream catcher for christmas, I was surprised you came up with this poem for me thanks again.


  • Joseph Hollis
    January 1, 2009

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    Oh my, this is quite lovely and expressed with such heartfelt sentiments.

    The beauty of love is certainly present within these words. Thanks for sharing.


  • poetryality silver member
    December 9, 2008

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    Oh My Leo! I could cry! I am so happy that your loving heart has found a love to return that love.

    You are so deserving to be happy. I am smiling all over myself. HELLO DARLENE! You are as fortunate as Leo is! God Bless & keep the both of you. Savor life, enjoy!

    Your poetry is very touching as it always is. But the message...~Sigh



    All My LOVE ♥

    Renee


  • myrataal gold member
    December 6, 2008

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    Hallo Leo and your Darlene!

    Happy Festival Season to you two. I hope your ways are wondrous and glitsy. Never forget that Love is His Gift for us, and that we recall his Birth which spelled freedom for us all.


    Love
    Myra


  • Patpowers
    November 13, 2008

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    Nice work on this tribute to Darlene! Your words are so romantic to read. Well worth it!! CONGRATULATIONS!


  • myrataal gold member
    November 2, 2008
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    What a wondrous name ...

    for your own darling: Darlene! God-sent, and real, Leo -- AT LAST!

    I am so glad for you, my friend -- Tell Darlene I pray for you both for a happy future ...

    Love
    Myra


  • Xx Alice xX
    October 29, 2008
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    Best wishes to you and Darlene, from Ken and me.


  • waydownuponjoy
    October 29, 2008

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    Thanks for sharing this Leo!

    A sweet poem for a sweet lady and I do wish you all the best! I am glad that you finally connected!

    I do miss you just the same ... jy


  • heartnsoul
    October 28, 2008

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    I have been checking every day waiting for your poem. Its beautiful Leo. And here you thought no one heard your most fervent prayers. Bet she was right under your nose too! You have to admit, Darlene was well worth waiting for. She is such a great lady.


  • catz Moderators member
    October 28, 2008

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    I'm so happy for you, Leo and she must be a very nice lady for you to be inspired to write such wonderful words about her.

    Thanks for sharing your happiness... tell her she better be good to my friend, you deserve it


    Dee


  • Cannonsfire
    October 28, 2008

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    Happy for you Leo...congrats

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