You are elegance personified
every subtle nuance
of your femininity
draws me closer
as our bodies heave
to a slow syncopation
and we glide
like stallion and rider
as one, spellbound
moving to a crescendo
of warm flesh
and sighs.
Author notes
Prompt: "Mesmerized by your movement"
A contest entry
- Individual Prompts.... by kiwigirljacks.
700 points, ended November 4, 2008, 17 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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This could easily be something Jackkksss wrote.
'personified'<==kick-ass use of this
"like stallion and rider"
So good. I only wish it was in a different context.
Jessica
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simply seductive. good write and best of luck with the contest.
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Oh so beautiful and softly sensual. Gives the heart a sigh and makes one mesmerized by your words!
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"as one, spellbound
moving to a crescendo
of warm flesh
and sighs."
this is so lovely
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"glide like sta;lion and rider"...beautiful imagery. The whole piece id beautiful.
Shelly
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This is a sigh poem...so elegant, so vey sensual. Loved the sense of movement here....and the rhythm!
~ Nicolette
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*sigh*
Love,
Amera♥
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oi, tis beautiful and lovingly sensual as well. wonderfully written, and expressed.
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