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Mists

Icicles with angry faces, hanging by a thread
dripping thoughts, malicious, freeze inside my head.
Breath mists rise in anger, my eyelids burn with snow
as a teardrop melts, forgotten, I feel my anger grow.
             
Drowning in a snowflake,  a blizzard tastes my eyes
bitterness receives me, I soar in reddened skies.
Feed my outrage, taste my wrath,  paint my hatred white
colour me vexation,  feel this wintered bite.


                                             
           
           

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Prompt :
1. Hot and bothered while standing in a mental igloo

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  • penman gold member
    October 29, 2008
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    Wonderful

    Very creative and so well done. Best of luck in the contest.